tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3640496057427000320.post5394554236800868133..comments2022-11-08T10:33:46.069-05:00Comments on Mommy is a Power Ranger: Aurora's Story-Part 1Alisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18371233258950468974noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3640496057427000320.post-13605561327474063882011-10-03T13:10:40.909-04:002011-10-03T13:10:40.909-04:00invite you to write for our short story slam week ...invite you to write for our short story slam week 11 today.<br /><br />write a story or a poem based on the image you see.<br /><br />check us out via pages on top.<br /><br />http://bluebellbooks.blogspot.com/Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3640496057427000320.post-10157173372387237652011-10-01T22:24:38.511-04:002011-10-01T22:24:38.511-04:00Thank you all for the comments! They are actually...Thank you all for the comments! They are actually much more positive than I expected. I am definitely going to continue this story on the blog.Alisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18371233258950468974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3640496057427000320.post-87946327065432553042011-10-01T03:33:19.514-04:002011-10-01T03:33:19.514-04:00I found that last line distinctly sinister... is s...I found that last line distinctly sinister... is she even going to be allowed to leave? Just one crit - I think the first para should be in the present tense too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3640496057427000320.post-56752860164565051882011-09-30T17:12:26.696-04:002011-09-30T17:12:26.696-04:00Please please please don't let him be a serial...Please please please don't let him be a serial killer or a NOLA charlatan or a vampire in disguise. I like Ian of the elaborate staircase and european accent. ;)Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3640496057427000320.post-45525156796470730972011-09-30T15:08:19.769-04:002011-09-30T15:08:19.769-04:00Ok, I'm totally dying to know. I'm betting...Ok, I'm totally dying to know. I'm betting bad. <br /><br />Great job pulling me in!Natalie @ MamaTrackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758284793476930617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3640496057427000320.post-46424004261682202832011-09-30T13:24:37.299-04:002011-09-30T13:24:37.299-04:00Yes, but the way you wrote created a visual scene....Yes, but the way you wrote created a visual scene. I liked it!Kristy @Loveandblasphemyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02634987114195614214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3640496057427000320.post-85302188272713247662011-09-30T12:55:47.178-04:002011-09-30T12:55:47.178-04:00I'm intrigued at this Ian guy... hmmm... is he...I'm intrigued at this Ian guy... hmmm... is he good or bad? ;))Sweatyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07886118636402604168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3640496057427000320.post-50717962701626220972011-09-30T12:11:39.050-04:002011-09-30T12:11:39.050-04:00Anne Rice,is he going to be a vampire? Sure sounds...Anne Rice,is he going to be a vampire? Sure sounds like it. I look forward to the rest.katie eggemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00615362861509258088noreply@blogger.com